Pitch Feedback

Myself, Kaan and Jack presented our pitch and idea to our classmates and received very useful feedback which we will try to use and take on board in order to make our artist and brand better.

Positive Feedback; 

• The song choice
• The artist's background 
• The label
• Locations made clear

Constructive Feedback; 

• Narrative of video was not made clear
• Our artist's name was unknown 
• Too young